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28 Thg 3 2014
- Tiếng Trung Quốc giản thế (Trung Quốc)
- Tiếng Mông Cổ Tương đối thành thạo
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Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
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I wrote these sentences for using the vocabulary I learned, I hope it can help me to improve my English level.
However, I don't know if they are heard naturally.
Expecting your check! Thank you so much!
##vocabulary practice time##
1.There is no doubt that doing such stuff could make people feel a pang of conscience.
2. I have seen many army theme movies these days and I got many brutal scenes.
3. The company created by him ten years ago has gradually evolved into a multinational business group.
4. My contention is that human right is more important than local law.
I wrote these sentences for using the vocabulary I learned, I hope it can help me to improve my English level.
However, I don't know if they are heard naturally.
Expecting your check! Thank you so much!
##vocabulary practice time##
1.There is no doubt that doing such stuff could make people feel a pang of conscience.
2. I have seen many army theme movies these days and I got many brutal scenes.
3. The company created by him ten years ago has gradually evolved into a multinational business group.
4. My contention is that human right is more important than local law.
However, I don't know if they are heard naturally.
Expecting your check! Thank you so much!
##vocabulary practice time##
1.There is no doubt that doing such stuff could make people feel a pang of conscience.
2. I have seen many army theme movies these days and I got many brutal scenes.
3. The company created by him ten years ago has gradually evolved into a multinational business group.
4. My contention is that human right is more important than local law.
Câu trả lời
28 Thg 3 2014
Câu trả lời nổi bật
- Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
More natural (just a few tiny things):
1. There is no doubt that doing such things/activities would make people feel a pang of guilt.
2. I have seen many army movies these days, so I've seen many brutal scenes.
(This is kind of a tough one because it sounds a little repetitive. It's ok, though.)
3. The company he created ten years ago has gradually evolved into a multinational business.
(It helps to be in the active form)
4. My argument/point of view is that human rights are more important than local law.
("Contention" is a little strange – it's like a many-way fight between several people. "Argument" is a word that means your addition to some kind of controversy, if that makes sense.)
Hope it helps! Good luck!
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- Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
More natural (just a few tiny things):
1. There is no doubt that doing such things/activities would make people feel a pang of guilt.
2. I have seen many army movies these days, so I've seen many brutal scenes.
(This is kind of a tough one because it sounds a little repetitive. It's ok, though.)
3. The company he created ten years ago has gradually evolved into a multinational business.
(It helps to be in the active form)
4. My argument/point of view is that human rights are more important than local law.
("Contention" is a little strange – it's like a many-way fight between several people. "Argument" is a word that means your addition to some kind of controversy, if that makes sense.)
Hope it helps! Good luck!
- Tiếng Trung Quốc giản thế (Trung Quốc)
- Tiếng Mông Cổ Tương đối thành thạo
Thank you so much, hanah! It helps me a lot~ if you have any quesion in Chinese or Japanese, just let me know, i'll try my best; )

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