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30 Thg 3 2017
- Tiếng Bồ Đào Nha (Bra-xin)
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Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
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Câu hỏi về Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
What do you think about this little story that I wrote? Does it sounds natural?
What could I make to improve? What is wrong?
Normally in the morning, I brush my teeth while listening to music. However, this morning the bathroom's floor was wet, I had just waken up when I got into it and when I was listening to Michael Jackson and I tried to do the moonwalk, I slipped and fell down with my body over my arm, I hurt my knees too. I couldn't stand up, I stayed lying for 4 hours, until my mom got home and took me to the hospital.
What do you think about this little story that I wrote? Does it sounds natural?
What could I make to improve? What is wrong?
Normally in the morning, I brush my teeth while listening to music. However, this morning the bathroom's floor was wet, I had just waken up when I got into it and when I was listening to Michael Jackson and I tried to do the moonwalk, I slipped and fell down with my body over my arm, I hurt my knees too. I couldn't stand up, I stayed lying for 4 hours, until my mom got home and took me to the hospital.
What could I make to improve? What is wrong?
Normally in the morning, I brush my teeth while listening to music. However, this morning the bathroom's floor was wet, I had just waken up when I got into it and when I was listening to Michael Jackson and I tried to do the moonwalk, I slipped and fell down with my body over my arm, I hurt my knees too. I couldn't stand up, I stayed lying for 4 hours, until my mom got home and took me to the hospital.
Câu trả lời
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- Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
- "I had just *woken* up"
- "I slipped and fell on top of my arm and.."
- "Came home" would be better than "got home"
Overall you did good. It's sounds pretty natural to me :)
Câu trả lời này có hữu ích không?
- Tiếng Bồ Đào Nha (Bra-xin)
- Tiếng Anh (Anh)
- Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
Normally in the morning, I brush my teeth while listening to music. However, this morning the bathroom's floor was wet. I had just woken up when, and I was listening to Michael Jackson. Then, I tried to do the moonwalk, but I slipped and fell on my arm; and I hurt my knees too. I couldn't stand up - I stayed lying for 4 hours. Eventually, my mom got home and took me to the hospital.
Câu trả lời này có hữu ích không?
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