An photoshoot gives you a modeling experience with a professional photographer.

I'd like to put this sentence like a headline on our website.
We have several photographers.

Does this sentence sound natural?
Or should I use "the photoshoot" / "our photographers" instead?

If I use “photographers”, doesn’t sound the person take photos with several photographers at the same time??

Thank you very much.

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25 Thg 1 2023

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@mizz Using "a professional photographer" wouldn't suggest that you have only one photographer - just that the photoshoot involves one photographer.

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Lachimolala_07

24 Thg 1 2023

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It sounds a little unnatural, I think you can say this:
“A photoshoot with our professional photographers gives you a modeling experience.”

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InsertANameHere

25 Thg 1 2023

Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)

I'd further improve on that by saying "A photoshoot with one of our professional photographers gives you a modeling experience." That specifies that only one photographer would be involved.

(You use "a" here instead of "an" because "photoshoot" starts with a consonant sound.)

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mizz

25 Thg 1 2023

Tiếng Nhật

@Lachimolala_07 Thank you so much!
Actually I want to add “with the landscape of Kyoto in the background” after “photoshoot”.
Like bellow
“A photoshoot with the landscape of Kyoto in the background gives you a modeling experience with a professional photographer.”

“A photoshoot with a professional photographer with the landscape of Kyoto in the background gives you a modeling experience.”
Does this↑ still sound natural??

mizz

25 Thg 1 2023

Tiếng Nhật

@InsertANameHere thank you so much!!

Even if I use “a professional photographer” instead of using “one of our professional photographers”,
does this sound that it doesn’t mean we have ONLY ONE photographer?
like, the reader think it implies that our service offers one of our photographers?