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19 Thg 4 2017
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Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
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It all started when I found a book on the bus. I picked the book up and looked around to find out who dropped it. There were no one around the book. I got off with the book. I saw the title of book going home. The mind reader It was interesting to me. When I arrived at home, I just started to read it.
In the book, a girl disappeared. The girl told her friend that she would meet him who was one of her customers because she was earning money by meeting mans. That night, after she left, she called police to let them know she was kidnapped by him. She was close to tears and said that she didn’t know where she is and that she saw a colorful thing when he dragged her. The policeman asked her to try to see other things. She answered ‘I don’t know. Just...Um…. There is no one here. I can’t hear any voice or sound. He hit me until I fainted and moved me here.’ That’s all.
This thick book was written up to here. I went to sleep, although I was confused. In the dark, I open my eyes. My face is full of tears and blood. I am in a building, and the floor is made by cement. My body is black and blue all over, and I can’t walk because my body is trembling. What I only have is a phone that has low battery. Suddenly, the phone is ringing, and I get the phone.
Please check grammar errors.
It all started when I found a book on the bus. I picked the book up and looked around to find out who dropped it. There were no one around the book. I got off with the book. I saw the title of book going home. The mind reader It was interesting to me. When I arrived at home, I just started to read it.
In the book, a girl disappeared. The girl told her friend that she would meet him who was one of her customers because she was earning money by meeting mans. That night, after she left, she called police to let them know she was kidnapped by him. She was close to tears and said that she didn’t know where she is and that she saw a colorful thing when he dragged her. The policeman asked her to try to see other things. She answered ‘I don’t know. Just...Um…. There is no one here. I can’t hear any voice or sound. He hit me until I fainted and moved me here.’ That’s all.
This thick book was written up to here. I went to sleep, although I was confused. In the dark, I open my eyes. My face is full of tears and blood. I am in a building, and the floor is made by cement. My body is black and blue all over, and I can’t walk because my body is trembling. What I only have is a phone that has low battery. Suddenly, the phone is ringing, and I get the phone.
It all started when I found a book on the bus. I picked the book up and looked around to find out who dropped it. There were no one around the book. I got off with the book. I saw the title of book going home. The mind reader It was interesting to me. When I arrived at home, I just started to read it.
In the book, a girl disappeared. The girl told her friend that she would meet him who was one of her customers because she was earning money by meeting mans. That night, after she left, she called police to let them know she was kidnapped by him. She was close to tears and said that she didn’t know where she is and that she saw a colorful thing when he dragged her. The policeman asked her to try to see other things. She answered ‘I don’t know. Just...Um…. There is no one here. I can’t hear any voice or sound. He hit me until I fainted and moved me here.’ That’s all.
This thick book was written up to here. I went to sleep, although I was confused. In the dark, I open my eyes. My face is full of tears and blood. I am in a building, and the floor is made by cement. My body is black and blue all over, and I can’t walk because my body is trembling. What I only have is a phone that has low battery. Suddenly, the phone is ringing, and I get the phone.
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- Tiếng Anh (Mỹ)
They're not all grammar mistakes. Just ways to make it flow better:
It all started when I found a book on the bus. I picked the book up and looked around for its owner. There was no one around. I got off the bus, still holding the book. As I was going home I read the title. The Mind Reader. Intriguing. When I got home, I started to read it.
In the book a girl disappeared. She told her customer that she would meet him. The girl was a prostitute. That night, she called 911. He kidnapped her. Through tears, she said," I don't know where I am. All I know is I saw something colorful while he was dragging me." The 911 operator asked her to try to describe anything else around her. She answered, "I don’t know. Just...Um…. There is no one here. I can’t hear any voice or sound. He hit me until I blacked out and brought me here." That’s all.
The thick book ended there. I went to sleep, although I was confused. In the dark, I opened my eyes. My face was full of tears and blood. I was in a building with a cement floor. My body was black and blue everywhere and I was unable to walk because my body was trembling. All I had was a phone with low battery. Suddenly the phone rang and I answered it.
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